One of my pet peeves is that your articles, even those with an associated press byline, do not follow what I have always thought was the standard “who, what, when, where” formula in the first paragraph. A recent example: December 7, the article “crews recover body in sinkhole” never names the state of Pennsylvania as the location. The town, the county, the township are all mentioned, but with no context. This leaves a reader at a loss! I did find the state in the photo caption, but really! The article should contain all the salient facts. Come on editors, do your job please. I subscribe to get higher journalistic standards than this.
Hollis Hemingway
Northwest side
Disclaimer: As submitted to the Arizona Daily Star.
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